（初中英语）读后续写描写篇之--心理描写

第二篇 第二章：读后续写描写篇之--心理描写、环境描写以及借景抒情描写

2.1.1 What kinds of idioms can we use in a person’s subtle psychological description in Chinese ?

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2.1.2What’s the function of employing such writing technique?

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心理活动在续写中的作用：

塑造人物形象，刻画人物性格；

推动故事情节发展。

Tip 1. 直接描写式通常有think，suppose，guess，wonder，say to oneself等词汇引导。直接描写式是最广泛的心理活动描写方式，此句的心理描写能直观反映主人公当时的心理。

Tip 2. 含蓄描写式

比如在安徒生作品皇帝的新装中，作者大量运用了直述内心独白描写环境描写心理活动的句子。，生动地刻画了皇帝以及大臣们虚伪、愚蠢的形象。

Since the fire,I had imagined that Mr Rochester might love me.Looking at my uninteresting face in the mirror,I knew it had been a silly daydream.Just because he took a polite interest and talked to me,I had thought he liked me.He would marry a charming noblewoman,like Blanche Ingram.Certainly not me. ---《Jane Eyre》 P48此处作者大量运用了直述内心独白，生动地刻画了简爱自卑的心理。

In the next room, something creaked. What was it about Grace Poole, that she was capable of fire-raising and savagery, but was still kept here? Why was Mr Mason up here at all, and why was everything so secret? And why had Mr Rochester been stunned by his arrival?

---《Jane Eyre》 P60

直接描写式是最广泛的心理活动描写方式描写环境描写心理活动的句子。，此句的心理描写能直观反映简爱当时对于发生在庄园的种种奇怪的事情难解的心理。

• How I wished for John but he was still walking home. ---《Black Beauty》 P31

• The only thing I missed terribly was my freedom. How I longed to run and play in the meadow or stand dozing in the shade of the trees. Now I was only free on a Sunday. If the weather was nice, all the horses were turned loose in the field. We had great fun rolling, galloping or standing together under the apple trees, and talking.

---《Black Beauty》 P14

• He did not speak a word to me, and looked so pale and desperate that I felt afraid.Was there some new disaster? Was he planning something terrible? Were we about to discover the truth about his past? ---《20,000 Leagues Under the Sea》P75

•The mother was holding her husband’s hand, looking up at him as if to say, “You are my knight in shining armor.” He was smiling and responding in pride, looking back at her as if to say, “You got that right.”

•How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight children that he didn’t have enough money to take them to the amusement park? Actually we were not wealthy in any sense,so I understand how the kids would feel.I felt sorry for them.

2.2.1 Please describe a certain state of mind that shows you are very hesitant.

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2.3 Questions to ponder

The sound of chirruping broke into her thoughts. She looked up. A robin was perched on the top branches of one of the trees. It sang so beautifully and she was sure it was looking straight at her when it did so! For the first time in months, Mary felt happy. ---《The Secret Garden》P15

2.3.1 What's the function of the above environmental description?

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2.3.2 Application：

If you go outing，you will find the surrounding scenery is pleasant.Please describe it by describing some things ,such as water、birth and sky to express your good mood.

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2.4 Try to express your mood vividly with the aid of some elements.

It was freezing and foggy,the ground was soaking,and our thin dresses and cloaks were not enough to keep us warm.Cold,hungry and alone,I looked at the miserable garden and wondered about my future here. ---《Jane Eyre》 P17

2.4.1 What environmental elements did the author describe in the scene?

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2.4.2 What's the function of the above environmental description?

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2.4.3 Application：

If you are swimming in the sea，you come across a storm. Please describe the situation by describing some things ,such as water、wave and sky to express your despairing mood.

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2.5 典范英语10中含有大量可以借用景物描写来烘托人物的情感和心绪的句子（情景交融的句子）：

•It was freezing and foggy,the ground was soaking,and our thin dresses and cloaks were not enough to keep us warm.Cold,hungry and alone,I looked at the miserable garden and wondered about my future here. ---《Jane Eyre》 P17

•Midsummer was radiantly sunny. On the long, warm evening of midsummer day when the sun was setting,I went for a walk in the orchard. The air was fragrant with flowers, but another scent lingered,too. ---《Jane Eyre》P67

•Then the wind died down for a time and ceased its wailing,and at last I fell asleep. ---《Wuthering Heights》P10

•Peering through the glass I saw that the snow was still falling,the flakes whirling in the wind. ---《Wuthering Heights》P10

•I loved being in the water, even though there was the chance of becoming a shark's dinner. Fish swam before me like sparkling jewels. Plant life swayed in the gentle currents. I knew I was seeing things that no other scientist had ever seen.

---《20,000 Leagues Under the Sea》 P51

•Suddenly, a beam of chilly light gleamed on the wall. It may only have been a lantern outside, but to me, alone in a place of death, it seemed ghostly and terrible. My heart beat thickly, my head grew hot, and I thought I would suffocate. Desperately I rushed to the door,screaming out for help and wrenching at the door handle.At last,Bessie and Miss Abbot came. ---《Jane Eyre》 P9

•Then they went away, locking me in. The red-room was enormous, shrouded in crimson curtains. All was dark wood and deep red furnishings except for the ghostly white covers on the bed. The furniture was grand, but the room was lonely, gloomy and cold. It had hardly been used since my Uncle Reed had died there, nine years before. ---《Jane Eyre》 P8

•There was a fire glowing,throwing shadows onto large,handsome furniture,and in a four-poster bed a boy about her own age was crying his heart out.

---《The Secret Garden》 P36

• The ivy grew wild here,trailing like a waterfall down to the ground./Roses trees...They had climbed over urns and arbours and other trees,spreading thorny tendrils across to each other,as if holding hands. ---《The Secret Garden》 P15

•Mary looked round at the garden.The place was a feast of autumn yellow and purple,and flaming scarlet.Late roses climbed and hung and clustered.The afternoon sun shone down on the leaves and made everything appear like a temple of gold.“Not me”,said Mary.”It was the magic of this place.The magic of the secret garden.” ---《The Secret Garden》 P75

•All the following day, snow swept into the valley and lay in drifts. In the evening twilight, I lit the fire and sat reading.

•The door banged, and in with a flurry of snow came St John Rivers, wrapped in his cloak. It was far too wild a night for anyone to come out! ---《Jane Eyre》 P6

•I saw a ruin.The house was blackened, roofless, and windowless a darkened gap yawned where the front door had been,the chimneys had crashed in, weeds grew between fallen rafters. The gardens were trampled and wrecked. Charring and soot showed that it had burned to destruction. Had it destroyed life, too? ---《Jane Eyre》 P104

2.6 Assignment:

Please describe a scene on our campus,using such elements as trees、flowers and grass.

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